A blog for Summer 2015 NEiA Publication Design class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way. As the semester ends, this class has produced 117 posts, 263 comments, and been viewed by over 5,000 internet readers. See the last group of postings below to view final student work: sample pages for the (fictional) Habitat Magazine: The Future of Food.
Dan, looking good. A few issues that I can see quickly is that there is so much neg space on the bottom of page 7 that we may think the article of over instead of flowing onto the next page. So… to elongate the column of type you could enlarge and/or add leading to the intro paragraph to push some text down the page. Also, on this page I’m wondering why the icon in top right is blue? Previously it changed it color to compliment the palette on the spread. Other than these little things, I can see nothing I could add at this point.
Dan, looking good. A few issues that I can see quickly is that there is so much neg space on the bottom of page 7 that we may think the article of over instead of flowing onto the next page. So… to elongate the column of type you could enlarge and/or add leading to the intro paragraph to push some text down the page. Also, on this page I’m wondering why the icon in top right is blue? Previously it changed it color to compliment the palette on the spread. Other than these little things, I can see nothing I could add at this point.
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