A blog for Summer 2015 NEiA Publication Design class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way. As the semester ends, this class has produced 117 posts, 263 comments, and been viewed by over 5,000 internet readers. See the last group of postings below to view final student work: sample pages for the (fictional) Habitat Magazine: The Future of Food.
Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Bains-Ad
Update on my Advertisement, feedback on the "Sign Out and Drop in" please I can't decide if this works or doesn't work, and does the "IN" blend too much with the background.
Izzy, yes the type near the sun is disappearing. Would you consider using this as a large headline along the top of the ad, and reduce “Aspen Resorts, etc” to sit smaller beneath the new headline? I like the fonts you’ve used for “Sign In, Drop Out”.
This didn't post well, so here it is again:
ReplyDeleteIzzy, yes the type near the sun is disappearing. Would you consider using this as a large headline along the top of the ad, and reduce “Aspen Resorts, etc” to sit smaller beneath the new headline? I like the fonts you’ve used for “Sign In, Drop Out”.