A blog for Summer 2015 NEiA Publication Design class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way. As the semester ends, this class has produced 117 posts, 263 comments, and been viewed by over 5,000 internet readers. See the last group of postings below to view final student work: sample pages for the (fictional) Habitat Magazine: The Future of Food.
Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Brannelly Spreads PLEASE CRITIQUE
Hello Everyone! I hate MIS as I am sure most of you do as well. I am sending my final PDF to Staples this afternoon/tonight. Here are my final spreads. I REALLY would appreciate any and ALL feedback on last minute tweaks/fixes or any major problems. I am 95% satisfied and just could either use some critiques or some reinforcement on what did work well. Thanks!
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Brittany – a quick looks tells me you might have a few small things to attend to, but overall these pages look good.
ReplyDeleteAre the taglines on the cover just a bit too close to her body?
ToC – having 2 “Cover Story” Bheads in a row seems a bit redundant. Maybe the top one could simply say “Cover Stories”?
Page 9 – I’m not sure we read the head “We might…” as an article heading, because it sits completely inside the photo it could be a column quote, and the text could be a flow over from page 8. How can you make us know that this is a new article with its own head?
Cover 4 – the “I” in It’s is lost. Can you move that last line (It’s Life.) to the right, so more contrast is present.
That’s it!