A blog for Summer 2015 NEiA Publication Design class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way. As the semester ends, this class has produced 117 posts, 263 comments, and been viewed by over 5,000 internet readers. See the last group of postings below to view final student work: sample pages for the (fictional) Habitat Magazine: The Future of Food.
Wednesday, August 12, 2015
Michael Eggerl - Exercise 2 Updated
Made some major changes to this spread design based on the feedback I've received.
Michael – This is a lovely, well-designed feature article with a sidebar that pulls out a section and creates interest on the right side of page. Contrasting heading weights supports the meaning behind the words. Details, like the 1st line of each paragraph in contrast to the rest of the body copy, makes this a finished design – every area intentionally created. Images work together nicely without being repetitive. Nice. Nice. Nice.
Michael – This is a lovely, well-designed feature article with a sidebar that pulls out a section and creates interest on the right side of page. Contrasting heading weights supports the meaning behind the words. Details, like the 1st line of each paragraph in contrast to the rest of the body copy, makes this a finished design – every area intentionally created. Images work together nicely without being repetitive. Nice. Nice. Nice.
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