Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Perricone TOC

Hey Everyone ! So this is my table of contents, I kept a lot of the same themes i've used throughout my version of HABITAT, let me know what you think! I'm still making some adjustments but I wanted to get it up here so I could get some feedback and make some changes before class tomorrow, see you all then!


1 comment:

  1. David – this is so interesting! A great approach, and I see a hierarchy of information on the page, which helps me know what items are more important than others. You need the masthead and the issue theme to appear somewhere… maybe up near the date? And, the negative space to right of “8” is a hole. I suggest you run some copy in that space, like I see in 2 other places on this page. You started giving us the name of the article in the white or black bars… and you need to continue it – so I’m wondering what the title of the article that starts on “9” is? Or… is this an article named “climate change means one world’s death and another’s birth” that you have found somewhere?

    The bottom of the page seems like it could hold some more content. Feel free to make up a few more departments to add to the ToC, just for this page – you don’t actually need to include them in the magazine pages you design.

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