A blog for Summer 2015 NEiA Publication Design class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way. As the semester ends, this class has produced 117 posts, 263 comments, and been viewed by over 5,000 internet readers. See the last group of postings below to view final student work: sample pages for the (fictional) Habitat Magazine: The Future of Food.
Thursday, September 3, 2015
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Hey Guys what are your thoughts for the table of contents? I think I am going to use this color green in my color palette instead of the more limey tone. I think the jeweled tone reflects the wealth and sophistication of my target audience more. I liked the image because the seeds blowing away represents rebirth and change in the future. Let me know what you think.
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Jehan – lovely, and almost done as far as I can see as long as your audience doesn’t need more encouragement to turn the page to a particular article. This is a page that should be encouraging them to navigate forward. I see some space in lower left that could be used for a few small photos, if you agree. It’s all about your audience, so consider it from their perspective. Note: the department “Science” needs to be set apart, as you’ve done with the others.
ReplyDeleteThis look great Jehan!
ReplyDeleteI think the use of the images works very well here and the symbolism behind it.
My only suggestion would be to push the typography a little more, I don't know is maybe messing around the weights of other typefaces. Just a thought!
But so far looks good!
Great image and work on your typography. With the use of one color, you've still been able to visually demonstrate some hierarchy with the type. Not sure if this would improve the layout, but I might consider placing small images where you have the numbers. Or possibly placing two large images, one to the left of Features and one to the left of Departments.
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